【急】英语好的朋友进来帮个忙!我写了这篇英语作文,水平虽然不高,但还是没有十足的把握,想请诸位帮忙检查一下,有错误请指出来,包括词汇、短语、语法等等,I've had no friends.Because I grew up i
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![【急】英语好的朋友进来帮个忙!我写了这篇英语作文,水平虽然不高,但还是没有十足的把握,想请诸位帮忙检查一下,有错误请指出来,包括词汇、短语、语法等等,I've had no friends.Because I grew up i](/uploads/image/z/8698873-49-3.jpg?t=%E3%80%90%E6%80%A5%E3%80%91%E8%8B%B1%E8%AF%AD%E5%A5%BD%E7%9A%84%E6%9C%8B%E5%8F%8B%E8%BF%9B%E6%9D%A5%E5%B8%AE%E4%B8%AA%E5%BF%99%21%E6%88%91%E5%86%99%E4%BA%86%E8%BF%99%E7%AF%87%E8%8B%B1%E8%AF%AD%E4%BD%9C%E6%96%87%2C%E6%B0%B4%E5%B9%B3%E8%99%BD%E7%84%B6%E4%B8%8D%E9%AB%98%2C%E4%BD%86%E8%BF%98%E6%98%AF%E6%B2%A1%E6%9C%89%E5%8D%81%E8%B6%B3%E7%9A%84%E6%8A%8A%E6%8F%A1%2C%E6%83%B3%E8%AF%B7%E8%AF%B8%E4%BD%8D%E5%B8%AE%E5%BF%99%E6%A3%80%E6%9F%A5%E4%B8%80%E4%B8%8B%2C%E6%9C%89%E9%94%99%E8%AF%AF%E8%AF%B7%E6%8C%87%E5%87%BA%E6%9D%A5%2C%E5%8C%85%E6%8B%AC%E8%AF%8D%E6%B1%87%E3%80%81%E7%9F%AD%E8%AF%AD%E3%80%81%E8%AF%AD%E6%B3%95%E7%AD%89%E7%AD%89%2CI%27ve+had+no+friends.Because+I+grew+up+i)
【急】英语好的朋友进来帮个忙!我写了这篇英语作文,水平虽然不高,但还是没有十足的把握,想请诸位帮忙检查一下,有错误请指出来,包括词汇、短语、语法等等,I've had no friends.Because I grew up i
【急】英语好的朋友进来帮个忙!
我写了这篇英语作文,水平虽然不高,但还是没有十足的把握,想请诸位帮忙检查一下,有错误请指出来,包括词汇、短语、语法等等,
I've had no friends.Because I grew up in poor health and I rarely went to school.But since I came to this school,I have made many friends.They are very take care of me,I am moved by their concerns and affection.so I want to talk about one of them.
She is a very cheerful girl,and she often helps me.For example,I feel my English is not good,and then she told me a lot about how to learn English better.Once my finger was burnt,then she went to buy medication for me without telling me.I was so moved that I had not word to say anything.
I always think that I'm a introverted and shy girl.she made me open my mind to more people.
1楼的朋友谢谢你,但是你扭曲了我的部分意思。
3楼的朋友,我看得很明白,但是我不清楚一点:“They cake care of me badily”这句cake或许是你拼错了,这我看得懂,但是我想问一下badily是什么意思?抱歉我没能查到。周三我就要用了,希望你能早点看到我的补充:
【急】英语好的朋友进来帮个忙!我写了这篇英语作文,水平虽然不高,但还是没有十足的把握,想请诸位帮忙检查一下,有错误请指出来,包括词汇、短语、语法等等,I've had no friends.Because I grew up i
还行啦 基本上没问题,2楼的改错很不靠谱,楼主要有信心,我把原则性错误的地方改一下吧(有问题的地方我用【】标记,改在后面的括号里)
I've had no friends.Because I grew up in poor health and I rarely went to school.But since I came to this school,I have made many friends.【They are very take care of me】(They cake care of me badily),I am moved by their 【concerns】(concern不是可数名词) and affection.so I want to talk about one of them.
She is a very cheerful girl,and she often helps me.For example,I feel my English 【is】(is去掉,not good 直接是feel的表语或者前面的feel改成think) not good,and then she told me a lot about how to learn English better.Once my finger 【was burnt】(got burnt),then she went to buy medication for me without telling me.I was so moved that I had 【not】(no) word to say anything.
I always think that I'm a introverted and shy girl.she made me 【 open】(to open,让某人做某事make sb to do sth.) my mind to more people.
I've had no friends.Because I grew up in poor health and I rarely
第一句时态不对,I don't any friends 在第二句中and之后的I有点赘述,可去
went to school.But since I came to this school,I have made many
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I've had no friends.Because I grew up in poor health and I rarely
第一句时态不对,I don't any friends 在第二句中and之后的I有点赘述,可去
went to school.But since I came to this school,I have made many
掉
friends.They are very take care of me, I am moved by their concerns
这一句应改为They take care of me much,之后的句子中的concern是
and affection.so I want to talk about one of them.
不可数的,不可以加s
She is a very cheerful girl,and she often helps me.For example,I feel
在这句中,前后时态
my English is not good,and then she told me a lot about how to learn
应保持一致,应将feel改为felt
English better.Once my finger was burnt,then she went to buy
medication for me without telling me.I was so moved that I had not
medicine
word to say anything.
anything应去掉
I always think that I'm a introverted and shy girl.she made me open
It's she who make
my mind to more people.
me open my mind to more people这么该客气强调作用,而且应保持时态一致
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I didn't have any friends. Because I grew up in poor health and i rarely went to shool. Since I came to this school, I have made many frends. They take care of me so much, and I appreciate them about ...
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I didn't have any friends. Because I grew up in poor health and i rarely went to shool. Since I came to this school, I have made many frends. They take care of me so much, and I appreciate them about looking after me, so I want to talk about one of them. she is very cheerful girl, and she often helps me. For example, I was not in English, and she told me a lot about how to learn English. Once my finger was burnt, she bought the medicine for me, I didn't know she did till a long time after. I should thank her so much.
I always think that I'm a introverted and shy girl.she made me open my mind to more people.
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3楼的意思是badly糟糕的意思.他打错了