请大家帮忙修改下英语作文假设你是王明,上周你在商店买了一台电视机,回家后发现有这样那样的质量问题(声音、色彩失真等),去商店要求退还.营业员服务态度又不好,不予受理,因此你给
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![请大家帮忙修改下英语作文假设你是王明,上周你在商店买了一台电视机,回家后发现有这样那样的质量问题(声音、色彩失真等),去商店要求退还.营业员服务态度又不好,不予受理,因此你给](/uploads/image/z/5989911-15-1.jpg?t=%E8%AF%B7%E5%A4%A7%E5%AE%B6%E5%B8%AE%E5%BF%99%E4%BF%AE%E6%94%B9%E4%B8%8B%E8%8B%B1%E8%AF%AD%E4%BD%9C%E6%96%87%E5%81%87%E8%AE%BE%E4%BD%A0%E6%98%AF%E7%8E%8B%E6%98%8E%2C%E4%B8%8A%E5%91%A8%E4%BD%A0%E5%9C%A8%E5%95%86%E5%BA%97%E4%B9%B0%E4%BA%86%E4%B8%80%E5%8F%B0%E7%94%B5%E8%A7%86%E6%9C%BA%2C%E5%9B%9E%E5%AE%B6%E5%90%8E%E5%8F%91%E7%8E%B0%E6%9C%89%E8%BF%99%E6%A0%B7%E9%82%A3%E6%A0%B7%E7%9A%84%E8%B4%A8%E9%87%8F%E9%97%AE%E9%A2%98%EF%BC%88%E5%A3%B0%E9%9F%B3%E3%80%81%E8%89%B2%E5%BD%A9%E5%A4%B1%E7%9C%9F%E7%AD%89%EF%BC%89%2C%E5%8E%BB%E5%95%86%E5%BA%97%E8%A6%81%E6%B1%82%E9%80%80%E8%BF%98.%E8%90%A5%E4%B8%9A%E5%91%98%E6%9C%8D%E5%8A%A1%E6%80%81%E5%BA%A6%E5%8F%88%E4%B8%8D%E5%A5%BD%2C%E4%B8%8D%E4%BA%88%E5%8F%97%E7%90%86%2C%E5%9B%A0%E6%AD%A4%E4%BD%A0%E7%BB%99)
请大家帮忙修改下英语作文假设你是王明,上周你在商店买了一台电视机,回家后发现有这样那样的质量问题(声音、色彩失真等),去商店要求退还.营业员服务态度又不好,不予受理,因此你给
请大家帮忙修改下英语作文
假设你是王明,上周你在商店买了一台电视机,回家后发现有这样那样的质量问题(声音、色彩失真等),去商店要求退还.营业员服务态度又不好,不予受理,因此你给经理写一封投诉信.信中必须包括以下内容:1.事情的起因2.与商店交涉的经过3.呼吁服务行业必须提高服务质量(参考词汇:失真 distorted)
Dear manager,
I am writing to tell you that(此前为开头)one incident happened some days before .Last week I bought a TV set from your store .But when I returned home .I found that it has a number kinds of quality problems like sound and colors distorted .Therefore ,I took it back to store to ask for change .When I talked to the shopkeeper ,however ,I was treated very badly .And I was told that he won’t solve this problem .
I think ,never will a company develop well with badly service .The service industry must improve their service quality
Hope to get a solution
Yours sincerely ,
Wang Ming
请大家帮忙修改下英语作文假设你是王明,上周你在商店买了一台电视机,回家后发现有这样那样的质量问题(声音、色彩失真等),去商店要求退还.营业员服务态度又不好,不予受理,因此你给
Dear manager,
I am writing to tell you that(此前为开头)one incident happened some days before . Last week I bought a TV set from your store . But when I returned home . I found that (把that 删去)it has a number(把a number改为some) kinds of quality problems like sound and colors distorted . Therefore , I took it back to store to ask for change . When I talked to the shopkeeper , however , I was treated very badly . And I was told that he won’t (把won’t 改为couldn't)solve this problem .
I think , never will a company (把never will移至company 后,并把never will删除)develop well with badly service . The service industry must improve their service quality !
Hope to get a solution !
Yours sincerely ,
Wang Ming
好,太好了
Dear manager,
I am writing to tell you that(此前为开头)one incident happened some days before . Last week I bought a TV set from your store . But when I returned home . I found that it has(改为had) a...
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Dear manager,
I am writing to tell you that(此前为开头)one incident happened some days before . Last week I bought a TV set from your store . But when I returned home . I found that it has(改为had) a number(改为 some) kinds of quality problems like sound and colors distorted . Therefore , I took it back to store to ask for (加 a) change . When I talked to the shopkeeper , however , I was treated very badly . And I was told that he won’t(过去将来时,可以不改,但有点尖锐) solve this problem .
I think(改为 thought) , never will(改为would) a company develop well with badly(改为 bad,形容词) service . The service industry must improve their service quality !
Hope to get a solution !
Yours sincerely ,
Wang Ming
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