急,麻烦各位帮我看看这篇作文有什么语病吗,谢谢Today is Saturday September 3rd 2011.When I got up at 6:45,it is so little time for me to catch the early bus that i had to ride to school in a hurry. When i got to school ,there was ma
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![急,麻烦各位帮我看看这篇作文有什么语病吗,谢谢Today is Saturday September 3rd 2011.When I got up at 6:45,it is so little time for me to catch the early bus that i had to ride to school in a hurry. When i got to school ,there was ma](/uploads/image/z/13495392-0-2.jpg?t=%E6%80%A5%2C%E9%BA%BB%E7%83%A6%E5%90%84%E4%BD%8D%E5%B8%AE%E6%88%91%E7%9C%8B%E7%9C%8B%E8%BF%99%E7%AF%87%E4%BD%9C%E6%96%87%E6%9C%89%E4%BB%80%E4%B9%88%E8%AF%AD%E7%97%85%E5%90%97%2C%E8%B0%A2%E8%B0%A2Today+is+Saturday+September+3rd+2011.When+I+got+up+at+6%3A45%2Cit+is+so+little+time+for+me+to+catch+the+early+bus+that+i+had+to+ride+to+school+in+a+hurry.+When+i+got+to+school+%2Cthere+was+ma)
急,麻烦各位帮我看看这篇作文有什么语病吗,谢谢Today is Saturday September 3rd 2011.When I got up at 6:45,it is so little time for me to catch the early bus that i had to ride to school in a hurry. When i got to school ,there was ma
急,麻烦各位帮我看看这篇作文有什么语病吗,谢谢
Today is Saturday September 3rd 2011.When I got up at 6:45,it is so little time for me to catch the early bus that i had to ride to school in a hurry. When i got to school ,there was many students standing in the school gate because the school closed . My friend and i decided to have a picnic in the park and we did not go home until my mother called me going home by bus .Now it is 9:00 and it is time for going to bed.大致意思是今天是2011年9月3日,星期六早晨6点45分起床,匆忙去上学,学校停课.然后和几个同学去野餐,乘车回家.9点睡觉.
急,麻烦各位帮我看看这篇作文有什么语病吗,谢谢Today is Saturday September 3rd 2011.When I got up at 6:45,it is so little time for me to catch the early bus that i had to ride to school in a hurry. When i got to school ,there was ma
Today is Saturday, September 3rd 2011. I got up at 6:45, so I had very little time to catch the early bus. Therefore I had to ride to school in a hurry. When i arrived at school ,there were many students standing in front of the school gate because the school was closed . My friend and i decided to have a picnic in a park and we did not go home until my mother called me. Then I went home by bus .Now it is 9:00 and time to go to bed.
我随便改了下,差不多比较通顺了.