请老师帮忙改改英语作文,按高考要求满分25分,应该给几分?(单词要求100左右)谢谢!Dear Mr Smith,I’m terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t join in the outing that you organize for on Sunday morning.I broke my foot ye
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![请老师帮忙改改英语作文,按高考要求满分25分,应该给几分?(单词要求100左右)谢谢!Dear Mr Smith,I’m terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t join in the outing that you organize for on Sunday morning.I broke my foot ye](/uploads/image/z/12661673-41-3.jpg?t=%E8%AF%B7%E8%80%81%E5%B8%88%E5%B8%AE%E5%BF%99%E6%94%B9%E6%94%B9%E8%8B%B1%E8%AF%AD%E4%BD%9C%E6%96%87%2C%E6%8C%89%E9%AB%98%E8%80%83%E8%A6%81%E6%B1%82%E6%BB%A1%E5%88%8625%E5%88%86%2C%E5%BA%94%E8%AF%A5%E7%BB%99%E5%87%A0%E5%88%86%3F%EF%BC%88%E5%8D%95%E8%AF%8D%E8%A6%81%E6%B1%82100%E5%B7%A6%E5%8F%B3%EF%BC%89%E8%B0%A2%E8%B0%A2%21Dear+Mr+Smith%2CI%E2%80%99m+terribly+sorry+to+tell+you+that+I+can%E2%80%99t+join+in+the+outing+that+you+organize+for+on+Sunday+morning.I+broke+my+foot+ye)
请老师帮忙改改英语作文,按高考要求满分25分,应该给几分?(单词要求100左右)谢谢!Dear Mr Smith,I’m terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t join in the outing that you organize for on Sunday morning.I broke my foot ye
请老师帮忙改改英语作文,按高考要求满分25分,应该给几分?(单词要求100左右)谢谢!
Dear Mr Smith,
I’m terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t join in the outing that you organize for on Sunday morning.I broke my foot yesterday afternoon when I was playing basketball with my friends I have to stay in bed for several days till it recovers.It is a great pity for me to miss such a good chance to spend time with you.I would be very happy if you could give me your kind understanding.And I hope you can have a good time.
请老师帮忙改改英语作文,按高考要求满分25分,应该给几分?(单词要求100左右)谢谢!Dear Mr Smith,I’m terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t join in the outing that you organize for on Sunday morning.I broke my foot ye
Dear Mr Smith,
I’m terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t join in the outing that you will organize(一般将来时) on Sunday morning.I broke my foot yesterday afternoon,when I was playing basketball with my friends.I will have to stay in bed for several days till it recovers.(将来完成时),It is a great pity for me to miss such a good chance to spend time with you. I (最好不用would,虚拟语气表示不真实的,如果你这里用虚拟语气,别人觉得你很假)will be very happy if you could give me your kind understanding. And I hope you will have a good(最好用happy吧,) time.
句子结尾用 your sincerely
li hua(随便写的名字)
这就是高考作文的基本套路了,还有注意断句,标点,不要一个句子写到尾,随时要断句.不然阅卷老师费解,没什么大的语法错误,得18分应该没问题,主要是你结尾没落款写信人的名字.