马上就要开学了,我是小升初.那么我自己写了英语自我介绍,我希望大家可以帮我修改一下.Holly,every one.My name is ××.I’m 157 cm.I’m 37 kg.I like orang.Travel,singing,reading,swimming,dancing is my hobby.My Chinese
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马上就要开学了,我是小升初.那么我自己写了英语自我介绍,我希望大家可以帮我修改一下.Holly,every one.My name is ××.I’m 157 cm.I’m 37 kg.I like orang.Travel,singing,reading,swimming,dancing is my hobby.My Chinese
马上就要开学了,我是小升初.那么我自己写了英语自我介绍,我希望大家可以帮我修改一下.
Holly,every one.My name is ××.I’m 157 cm.I’m 37 kg.I like orang.Travel,singing,reading,swimming,dancing is my hobby.My Chinese is good,but my math is not so well.I love a laugh girl.Happy every day..so,I hope that in the new school,new term is a new and happy start.And a new teacher of new students,study hard,make progress every day!Come on!
我也是按照字典自己写的,但是语法啊,用词啊可能不会太准确,那么大家帮我修改一下,或者有什么没有写进去的,帮我加进去,
马上就要开学了,我是小升初.那么我自己写了英语自我介绍,我希望大家可以帮我修改一下.Holly,every one.My name is ××.I’m 157 cm.I’m 37 kg.I like orang.Travel,singing,reading,swimming,dancing is my hobby.My Chinese
Hello,everyone.My name is x x.
I'm 157 cm,37 kg.
I'm twelve years old this year.
I am an active,bright,friendly and humorous girl.
So happy to stand here and introduce myself to you.
I have many hobbies,such as listening to the music,seeing films and so on.
I believe the new term is a beginning,I will get along well with us,and make progress together.
Thank you!
改了些,加了,年龄,自我介绍 不用多少 全班这么多的 人···
Hello,every one.My name is ××.I’m 157 cm.I’m 37 kg.I like to eat orange. and i also like Travelling,singing,reading,swimming,dancing . My Chinese is good, but my math is not so well.I like to be a nic...
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Hello,every one.My name is ××.I’m 157 cm.I’m 37 kg.I like to eat orange. and i also like Travelling,singing,reading,swimming,dancing . My Chinese is good, but my math is not so well.I like to be a nice girl.i hope a happy life..so,I hope that in the new school, this new term will be a new and happy start for me. And i very glad to see the new teacter and lovely classmates. i will study hard, and try my best to learning! thank you!
小妹妹,很有想法哦。英语写成这样还不错,有的地方帮你改过了,基本还可以,你可以对照你的中文理解一下。(大小写我没有关注,你自己改一下)
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Hello,every one.My name is ××.I’m 157 cm.I’m 37 kg.I like to eat orange. and i also like Travelling,singing,reading,swimming,dancing . My Chinese is good, but my math is not so well.I like to be a nic...
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Hello,every one.My name is ××.I’m 157 cm.I’m 37 kg.I like to eat orange. and i also like Travelling,singing,reading,swimming,dancing . My Chinese is good, but my math is not so well.I like to be a nice girl.i hope a happy life..so,I hope that in the new school, this new term will be a new and happy start for me. And i very glad to see the new teacter and lovely classmates. i will study hard, and try my best to learning! thank you!
希望对你有所帮助,祝你成功
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这种程度的话,建议你还是汉语说吧,没有特点,太一般。